Add-On: 20 Pages from Anywhere Critique
Send in 20 pages from anywhere in your novel as well as a brief synopsis and a brief description of where the scene fits in context, and I’ll give you detailed written feedback on what is working, what questions I have, what questions you might consider as you move forward. I’ll look at both the scene shape and structure, as well as how the scene elements (dialogue, description, interiority, etc.) fit together. After you’ve had a chance to digest my comments, we’ll have a 45-minute Zoom meeting where you can ask any questions you have, or think through new ideas you have together.
Send in 20 pages from anywhere in your novel as well as a brief synopsis and a brief description of where the scene fits in context, and I’ll give you detailed written feedback on what is working, what questions I have, what questions you might consider as you move forward. I’ll look at both the scene shape and structure, as well as how the scene elements (dialogue, description, interiority, etc.) fit together. After you’ve had a chance to digest my comments, we’ll have a 45-minute Zoom meeting where you can ask any questions you have, or think through new ideas you have together.
Send in 20 pages from anywhere in your novel as well as a brief synopsis and a brief description of where the scene fits in context, and I’ll give you detailed written feedback on what is working, what questions I have, what questions you might consider as you move forward. I’ll look at both the scene shape and structure, as well as how the scene elements (dialogue, description, interiority, etc.) fit together. After you’ve had a chance to digest my comments, we’ll have a 45-minute Zoom meeting where you can ask any questions you have, or think through new ideas you have together.